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Obviously, it is completely unfinished and i'm creating everything (all the pages and stuff like that) to use in my portfolio.

I don't want comments from people just saying "yeh good", i want stuff that I should add to the spaces (except the header).

Please give me suggestions as this is a project is something I want to finish to a high standard.

Thanks lads
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The quality seems to be iffy, but just look past that, it has saved weird, also there is more down the bottom, it's just the background is white so doesn't show home much space i actually have left.
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Looks simple, a bit too simple. I like the design but just doesn't look right.

The "Play" and "Review" buttons don't look good, maybe try lowering the Stroke on them? Also try a thinner font, see what it looks like.
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pulsev wrote Looks simple, a bit too simple. I like the design but just doesn't look right.

The "Play" and "Review" buttons don't look good, maybe try lowering the Stroke on them? Also try a thinner font, see what it looks like.


well, the "simple" comment is irrelevant considering it's far from finished and I'm sorry, but, i don't agree with a thinner font.
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pulsev wrote Looks simple, a bit too simple. I like the design but just doesn't look right.

The "Play" and "Review" buttons don't look good, maybe try lowering the Stroke on them? Also try a thinner font, see what it looks like.


well, the "simple" comment is irrelevant considering it's far from finished and I'm sorry, but, i don't agree with a thinner font.
And you said I can't take criticism? Okay cool.

But before you say you don't agree with everything, have you even tried looking at a thinner font?
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looks like netflix! maybe a different colour scheme, user chat box somewhere??

or maybe even a "films you might also like"
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pulsev wrote
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pulsev wrote Looks simple, a bit too simple. I like the design but just doesn't look right.

The "Play" and "Review" buttons don't look good, maybe try lowering the Stroke on them? Also try a thinner font, see what it looks like.


well, the "simple" comment is irrelevant considering it's far from finished and I'm sorry, but, i don't agree with a thinner font.
And you said I can't take criticism? Okay cool.

But before you say you don't agree with everything, have you even tried looking at a thinner font?


Well... when some of the criticism is irrelevant then i will say, which it was. Also, I try every font when designing.
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Lemon_ wrote looks like netflix! maybe a different colour scheme, user chat box somewhere??

or maybe even a "films you might also like"


Yeh, i was sort of using netflix as a research point, I should try a different colour to see if it works.

Also, probably won't add chat box because of the forums, but, the other suggestion is a good shout.
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