Clean???

It looks awful.

Colour correct is bad
Choice of crap to layer is bad

Try not to over do stuff man

Yeah that looks like it was plastered on with crayolas. Lower the stocks some.

i personally like it but i wouldnt say it is clean more abstract.

no need to be a dick about it to him.

The color choice is poor.

Also, there's way to much layers, it's had to just look at one.

I don't like all the extra design, but hey atleast you did well on the 3d text I guess.

It's one of my first goes with 3D text.
I didn't make the CC, may make one soon though.

And thanks for actually criticising,not just being dicks.

Over the text just looks like a bad render in process.

This is horrible.

I want to give criticism, without being too harsh. Everybody else covored that for me.

This is not clean at all. Clean implies, well, looking clean. Sharp, professional.
This is packed with stuff. It's cluttered, and there's a lot going on.

I do like the blue/green color scheme. But the green lines over the text makes it harder to see.
There is also just way too much going on behind the text. I would take some of that out.

I don't know what the giant thing behind the text is, but it's too way too bright, and the texture on it is very low quality.
You should darken that a bit, or maybe choose a different material or change the projection settings on the object.

And Cinema 4D isn't just for text floating in space.
I'd suggest tying to make a scene around it. A 3D room, or fiel or mountain.
3D text doesn't belong on a 2D canvas.