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Matos61
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hey guys i wanted some feed back on this video i made and i know the game couldve been better but overall i feel like i did a great job and I would love for you guys to check it out
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Says the video is private.
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Matos61
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i just fixed it sorry bout dat
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Going by the time in the game, not the video. Here's the feedback if you're looking to improve your gameplay.

00:30-01:55
You're not covering the red buff, makes for an easy invade for the other team. If you were to cover this and saw that the other team came to take it you could let your jungler know so that he can go straight to their red buff. Also, you can just use your trinket to ward the red buff at 01:30. The chances of you getting ganked before 3:00 are low, and after placing the ward at 01:30 it's put on a 2 minute cooldown. So for 30 seconds after 03:00 (if you don't see their jungler on the map anywhere else) you play more passive.
I see that they actually invaded the blue buff, but you never know next time.

02:30
You missed 3 CS out of 6 on the first wave without any pressure because your lane opponent wasn't there. It's bad on your opponent's part that he was that late to lane and missed all that experience and you'll be getting level 2 first, but you shouldn't be missing free CS like that. I probably won't comment on CS again because that's just a standard thing that I'm sure you know about. Just wanted to mention it atleast once. Also, on a side note, in silver a lot of people underestimate the power of a level 2 all in when someone else is late to lane, try to use that to your advantage.
Okay just 1 last time maybe, you hit 4 out of 12 CS in the first 2 waves, you pushed real fast to deny a lot of xp and gold to your opponent which is great, but I don't think someone coming that late to lane should be all that common. You need to use that xp advantage now.

03:10
You managed to zone him out well here because of the level advantage but pushing the lane too fast meant that you couldn't use it to the fullest.
I also noticed that you've already placed your ward trinket and it's on cooldown now. You saw that they invaded your blue buff so the enemy jungler is all the way on the other side of the map. There was no need to ward as early as you did because their jungler is probably going to go straight to his red buff or his own blue buff which means that he isn't going to reach your lane until round about this time, this is when you should be placing your ward down. Because of this you're vulnerable to ganks especially since you've got no ghost/flash and you're pushing the lane hard.

05:00
You're pushed, your ward ran out, you have no escape spells and enemy jungler is missing. This should be a free kill for the other team.

05:45
Pretty good (unintentional?) trade, you needed to back to buy anyway and he wasted his ignite for nothing. MUNDO THERE IS A FREE KILL UP TOP COME AND GET SINGED.

06:25
You spent a looong time in base deciding what to buy, this means that you'll lose gold and xp from minions dying to your turret and this would have allowed time for rengar to go back and buy and still get back to the lane at the same time as you which means he just gained net xp on your butt. Rengar didn't go back though, he continued pushing the lane so that you lose more minions/xp because you spent so long in base. Think about what you're going to buy as you back.
You also didn't buy a ward, you can't rely on your trinket to do all the work for you, they only last 60 seconds and refreshes every 120 seconds. You walked out of base with 75g aswell!

08:20
Ward ran out, lane pushed, no escape spells, where the hell is mundo? He should be camping your lane.

08:50
THERE'S MUNDO BUT HE MISSED HIS CLEAVER COME ON DUDE. You turned that around pretty nicely though, bit of a waste of a barrier but still worth. Good hustle.
Problem was that it looked like Mundo was already low just before he ganked you so he had already used his ult before he got into your lane, and his ult just ended as he came out of the brush. That should have been a free kill for them if it wasn't for that and him missing his cleaver. Still a real good job turning it around though.

09:30
Don't know why rengar stayed with such low health (he had no ward and elise was missing form the map, mundo was dead so he was alone), but GJ on the free kill. You gotta take those every time.

10:25
You don't need me to tell you you stayed too long there.

11:00
No ward again. If you're going to push the lane you need to buy wards. No boots or escape spells, you got some balls. Especially since mundo's blue buff should be up soon so he could come straight to top afterwards.

15:00
That mundo gank though. What was he thinking, was he not watching the minions or something?

16:20
No ward, trinket ward is definitely not going to do enough now that your tower is gone. This is the time of the game where you need to push and get tower or push lane and roam.

18:20
Waited way too long to make that gank work, renger could have had a ward in the river and that could have been the reason why ahri came up. You had no ward down, free kill for ahri. You used barrier and ignite, they only used ahri ult, worth for them.

Your lane is over now so I'm done with the feedback, didn't watch the rest of the game. I just skipped through it but from what I saw your team did pretty fine on their own, and rengar was the only threat to them.

Key points:
  • Your CSing was abysmal, work on that, seriously.
  • Ward more, mundo should have camped your lane because you had no escape spells, no wards and were constantly pushed.
  • If you're going to constantly push, roam down to mid lane or drop some deep wards into the enemy jungle or go take double golems, don't stand around doing nothing. Be efficient.


Hope I helped.
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Matos61
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thnx a lot that was some serious feedback and it was definitely helpful
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