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ySense
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I will be updating every time I create a new page.

Feedback as usual is more than welcome.

Home Page

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I've already put some feedback into the home page so this is just about the purchasing page.

The thing I don't get with you is you put your designs slanted which frustrates me because you can't see all the design. Just part of it. However, it adds some sort of detail into the page.

Also maybe place the "Order" buttons next to the title of the product your selling? I was just wondering because it might look better.

Good purchasing page though, I do like it.
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pulsev wrote I've already put some feedback into the home page so this is just about the purchasing page.

The thing I don't get with you is you put your designs slanted which frustrates me because you can't see all the design. Just part of it. However, it adds some sort of detail into the page.

Also maybe place the "Order" buttons next to the title of the product your selling? I was just wondering because it might look better.

Good purchasing page though, I do like it.


I slant them because i just looks a bit better than having them normal. Good shout for the button, i just tried and i'm not 100% on it, it looks alright but then there is too much space in the right side. Cheers lad.
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ySense wrote
pulsev wrote I've already put some feedback into the home page so this is just about the purchasing page.

The thing I don't get with you is you put your designs slanted which frustrates me because you can't see all the design. Just part of it. However, it adds some sort of detail into the page.

Also maybe place the "Order" buttons next to the title of the product your selling? I was just wondering because it might look better.

Good purchasing page though, I do like it.


I slant them because i just looks a bit better than having them normal. Good shout for the button, i just tried and i'm not 100% on it, it looks alright but then there is too much space in the right side. Cheers lad.
I was concerned about the space. At least you tried it.
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I think the title(s) of the graphics should be different to the description underneath it. It might just be me. Also, the title font looks a bit plain, you could mess around to see if any fonts are better, however you've most lightly already done that.

Looks good overall, but i think the way the text is layed out and the choice(s) of the colours could of been better with the text, however you've most lightly messed with the colours and this is what's best.
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Hoop wrote I think the title(s) of the graphics should be different to the description underneath it. It might just be me. Also, the title font looks a bit plain, you could mess around to see if any fonts are better, however you've most lightly already done that.

Looks good overall, but i think the way the text is layed out and the choice(s) of the colours could of been better with the text, however you've most lightly messed with the colours and this is what's best.



cheers for the feedback lad
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