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Check out my New Song "17" | I Turned 17 yesterday!
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A-Son
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Ok, so i turned 17 yesterday so i produced a whole song during the day and decided to release it today! Let me know what you think of it!



Feel free to leave some constructive criticism!
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SkullMaster47
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I'll be blunt, it's not good. Work on the flow of your voice.
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I really enjoyed listening to it! Great song!
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Its on the tip between Alright and not that great. But nice work man looks like it took you sometime to make. Also Happy b-lated birtday
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It sounds good man keep it up. Of course you need to improve but you have years ahead of you for that.
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I liked it a lot
You will always get better
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I think it sounds fairly good. I think your flow needs to be worked on though. It sounds a little choppy in some parts of the song. Overall not bad. And Happy late Birthday.
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Not that bad, happy birthday man
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I like the song a lot. Really nice job man!
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Pretty, good! Just keep working on it. There is always room for improvement!
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