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Thoughts? (15 min edit.)
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It took 15 mins (Not counting render time)
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I can hardly read the text.

The strips of light blue don't go with the red.

The text is too dark, because the right side of the image is so bright
You should have a light source on the right side, and have reflections facing that way.
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My thoughts? Spend more than 15 minutes on your work. You'll have time to improve on the lighting, fractal work, and perhaps some CC.

It's the start of something good, but needs more work and time to get there.
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Change the color of the text, but besides that it looks great!
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Way to much light on the right side + way to dark on the left + black text = disaster
But it could possibly good if those were fixed.
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