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Definitely not my best piece but i'm trying to make a return to the world of graphics.
Would love any constructive criticism, and all feedback.
Didn't take long at all, but would like to see what you guys think since there are many talented designers on here

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Its text on a gradient background with a couple little edits...

If you are going to try make the take different, you may aswell create the whole text instead of just extending rectangles.

Concept it clean but dont understand the arrows
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CDR wrote Its text on a gradient background with a couple little edits...

If you are going to try make the take different, you may aswell create the whole text instead of just extending rectangles.

Concept it clean but dont understand the arrows

The world is full of 3D Designers, i simply went for this approach purely for a different look. I can make both 3D art and clean work individually however i struggle to bring both together. Thanks for the feedback. The arrows represent my gameplay, however i see that you'd need to know that to find them convenient.
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woah hold ya horses....

I never once mentioned 3D, I wouldnt either

It isnt a different look, most people who cba to create text simply do the rectangles.

If the arrows are your style then cool it would come across on youtube and make sense
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Im not sure what it is about this, but it just doesn't really look that appealing to me... Maybe try changing the background to lighter shades of grey...

Also, there are way too many arrows in the logo.
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Axe wrote Im not sure what it is about this, but it just doesn't really look that appealing to me... Maybe try changing the background to lighter shades of grey...

Also, there are way too many arrows in the logo.
I agree with Axe about too many arrows. but other than that its really great in my opinion. I specialy like the xbox360 controller.
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It just looks to bland and boring. I'm not a graphics artist so I really can't tell you to do anything different.
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