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this is my first proper logo, im happy with it, i have a 2d one aswell, what do you think?


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I give it an 9/10. It looks really good man keep working!Also if you would like to make me one, ill show it off and try to get your name around for a skilled artist.
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3D logos... :lookround: :nervous:

Honestly, make that 2D and it'll be much better!

But if I'm honest, the shape doesn't show/represent anything? And also, I'd move the underline a bit lower down from the text, looks like it is running through it almost
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-3D wrote 3D logos... :lookround: :nervous:

Honestly, make that 2D and it'll be much better!

But if I'm honest, the shape doesn't show/represent anything? And also, I'd move the underline a bit lower down from the text, looks like it is running through it almost


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ignore the shadow, theres the 2d
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Kuz wrote I give it an 9/10. It looks really good man keep working!Also if you would like to make me one, ill show it off and try to get your name around for a skilled artist.


thanks man, maybe once i have the time , tommorow or today should i say
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Well ew on the 3D one but the 2d one.
1- Take the grey off of it..it looks ugly..
2- Use another font for BOTH of the text
3- Try moving the underline a bit lower
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Coilovers wrote Well ew on the 3D one but the 2d one.
1- Take the grey off of it..it looks ugly..
2- Use another font for BOTH of the text
3- Try moving the underline a bit lower


better?
i know the lines un even cbf fixing

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phoabs wrote
Coilovers wrote Well ew on the 3D one but the 2d one.
1- Take the grey off of it..it looks ugly..
2- Use another font for BOTH of the text
3- Try moving the underline a bit lower


better?
i know the lines un even cbf fixing

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Looks like letters were placed over each other then chopped, badly.
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Yes that looks a lot better! Just fix the lines and it would look better.
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CDR wrote
phoabs wrote
Coilovers wrote Well ew on the 3D one but the 2d one.
1- Take the grey off of it..it looks ugly..
2- Use another font for BOTH of the text
3- Try moving the underline a bit lower


better?
i know the lines un even cbf fixing

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Looks like letters were placed over each other then chopped, badly.


yeaah i know , this was a fast make , will take more time next time
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