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Started this last night at about 2am, not sure where to go with it. Feed-back and CnC is extremely appreciated.

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What the why is it rotated aahhh my head...

But anyways, seriousness.

I dont think greyscale is right for this image.
Possibly greyscale a layer above and then reduce the opacity so there is a little of the orange coming through. This will take some of the harsh strength from the main image.

Thats just my view
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Great! I love it I'd maybe change the text somehow, dont think it fits in, maybe add some bevel? and like Asymmetrical said id probably add a grey scale above and reduce the opacity
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iShocKzZ wrote Great! I love it I'd maybe change the text somehow, dont think it fits in, maybe add some bevel? and like Asymmetrical said id probably add a grey scale above and reduce the opacity
Could you perhaps elaborate on the text comment? Do you mean in terms of font?
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What is it for? Some parts of the letters blend in the background making it hard to read.
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Grimdark wrote
iShocKzZ wrote Great! I love it I'd maybe change the text somehow, dont think it fits in, maybe add some bevel? and like Asymmetrical said id probably add a grey scale above and reduce the opacity
Could you perhaps elaborate on the text comment? Do you mean in terms of font?
Yes its a bit um, Sharp? Maybe a smoother text might do the job? A font ive found to fit in almost everything is 'Champagne & Limousine'
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th3cleaner1 wrote What is it for? Some parts of the letters blend in the background making it hard to read.
It's not really for anything other than me trying out a different style, to be honest. I made this during a random burst of boredom. The blending is kind of intentional, but I'll try and make the text more outstanding in my next version.
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The rotation of the background image and the lack of color within the background image is okay and all, but I personally would brighten the colors within the ellipse in the center of your work, just a tad. And then make the font one solid, really readable color instead of half and half between color and gray scale. The font tells everyone what it is/stands for and if that part is hard to read or understand you could lose your intended audience before they even truly figure out what it is though.

Also, I like the design except for the changes I said above, and good job being original somewhat! Keep practicing and you will start to see better quality work!!
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