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I've never posted a full song before, here you go 3 verses
I'll come into this game with bad intentions,
Callin out rappers with mentions hoping to get called
out eventually blow but the wrong way,
I'll pop shit i shoudn't of said,
I'll probablyy end up with a
bullet in my head,
Shot down dead, it'll be my fault
but the game drove me to it,
But i'll do what I can to get signed
in the wrong state of mind but a sick
lyricist which you can't take away,
need a quick getaway if it don't
go my way. i'll say whatever I ****'
want to stay try to stop me,
Don't even threaten i'm not frettin
you a pretend gangsta, you can't
do shit, You lit me up get hit,
shitted on by us. You got me grittin my teeth
please stand on your feet and get rushed to the ground
so paranoid can;t stand a single sound.
I'll do what I can to get noticed
not for the money but to get the
attention i deserve for the lyrics
I write your name in my ink
you spittin pink blood in a sink
But that's your kink why you complainin
while drizze is maning and gettin done for assault,
but they say it's my fault (Pffft...)
last time you seen a lyricist as sick
as this must of been when infinite came out,
Shady stormed into the game had the world by a string
he was the king at the time, still a king in his prime
but it's time to step aside no disrespect but feeble emcees get wrecked.
I'm not cocky but I know my potentiol eminem was so influential
he's in my lyrics, But I just wanna see the day me and zep
fill a stadium up and we blow up We'll shut up anyone
who said we shouldn't or couldn't (****...)
This is about as real as it gets,
No lies or no threats, rap is
a tightrope with no net,
You either make it or don't but you don't dare
say that we wont, any amount of time
I have free I'll work on an ep
make cd's throw em out for free
and see what happens next, but remember,
I'm a born threat.
I feel confined and enraged,
rappers not even on the same page,
I wanna jump on stage
But instead i'm stuck in this cage,
unsigned and unreckognized,
so underrated, I'm deflated,
eyes dialated, Annihilated
and tired, fired up,
i'm so whiled up,
But I know I deserve a deal,
Lets be real, don't mock me
come out here and start callin me cocky,
Here is where i take stride i survive and
adapt come out the back get attacked
and whacked infact here,
Have my ep now the only rapper you'll ever be feeling is me,
It's a shame to see, you have an lp of a rapper who ain't shit
and got rich from rappin about a BITCH! I got a hitlist on who I need
to diss when I make it, I won't ever fake it, i'll always be me
Just remember this next time you listen to my cd.
I'll come into this game with bad intentions,
Callin out rappers with mentions hoping to get called
out eventually blow but the wrong way,
I'll pop shit i shoudn't of said,
I'll probablyy end up with a
bullet in my head,
Shot down dead, it'll be my fault
but the game drove me to it,
But i'll do what I can to get signed
in the wrong state of mind but a sick
lyricist which you can't take away,
need a quick getaway if it don't
go my way. i'll say whatever I ****'
want to stay try to stop me,
Don't even threaten i'm not frettin
you a pretend gangsta, you can't
do shit, You lit me up get hit,
shitted on by us. You got me grittin my teeth
please stand on your feet and get rushed to the ground
so paranoid can;t stand a single sound.
I'll do what I can to get noticed
not for the money but to get the
attention i deserve for the lyrics
I write your name in my ink
you spittin pink blood in a sink
But that's your kink why you complainin
while drizze is maning and gettin done for assault,
but they say it's my fault (Pffft...)
last time you seen a lyricist as sick
as this must of been when infinite came out,
Shady stormed into the game had the world by a string
he was the king at the time, still a king in his prime
but it's time to step aside no disrespect but feeble emcees get wrecked.
I'm not cocky but I know my potentiol eminem was so influential
he's in my lyrics, But I just wanna see the day me and zep
fill a stadium up and we blow up We'll shut up anyone
who said we shouldn't or couldn't (****...)
This is about as real as it gets,
No lies or no threats, rap is
a tightrope with no net,
You either make it or don't but you don't dare
say that we wont, any amount of time
I have free I'll work on an ep
make cd's throw em out for free
and see what happens next, but remember,
I'm a born threat.
I feel confined and enraged,
rappers not even on the same page,
I wanna jump on stage
But instead i'm stuck in this cage,
unsigned and unreckognized,
so underrated, I'm deflated,
eyes dialated, Annihilated
and tired, fired up,
i'm so whiled up,
But I know I deserve a deal,
Lets be real, don't mock me
come out here and start callin me cocky,
Here is where i take stride i survive and
adapt come out the back get attacked
and whacked infact here,
Have my ep now the only rapper you'll ever be feeling is me,
It's a shame to see, you have an lp of a rapper who ain't shit
and got rich from rappin about a BITCH! I got a hitlist on who I need
to diss when I make it, I won't ever fake it, i'll always be me
Just remember this next time you listen to my cd.
#2. Posted:
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Posts: 38
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Joined: Jun 11, 201410Year Member
Posts: 38
Reputation Power: 1
Yeah its good, not as good as others though.
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