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Hey guys, im 15 (turning 16 soon) and my passion is graphics.. I have about 3 years experience, but I just recently got SERIOUS with it, I'm definitely getting better with it, but i'd like some feedback.

I am interested in attending college for graphic design (I have a 4.4+ GPA), the only issue is a portfolio. I want to better my work and I know i'll have to get into Illustrator and stuff to become better. I am familiar with Thrausi and C4D as well, but could use all the help I can get. If you guys can leave criticism and some feedback (such as links to good packs or c4d/ai tutorials) that'd be great.. Thanks for reading!

Logo for youtube, simple, but thought it looked clean.

[img]https://pbs.twimg.com/media/BtBhJPdCAAAADkU.png:large[/img]

Random overlay with similar triangle design, RANDOM colors. Nothing special

[img]https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Bs4U5jEIQAAi7Wt.png:large[/img]

Current YouTube overlay, simple, but clean.

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Madden 15 Card Concept (Known on twitter for my Madden 25 Customs)

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That's all that I really have on my laptop, my graphics computer is a desktop and it's 2 AM.

Clearly there is a trend in my work, which is it's simplicity, I need to start focusing on more complex and skill based work.. Once again, thanks for taking a look at this post.
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First two are jpg-large because of twitter so they won't show up, try these links instead.

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I like them honestly! They're pretty coool
especially the ones you just posted
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deli wrote I like them honestly! They're pretty coool
especially the ones you just posted


Thanks man, I spend a lot of my time playing video games for my youtube channel, and another good amount on the computer fiddling around with photoshop. It's my passion, and im mediocre right now, I understand that! I just need the advice and criticism to make me great!
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Pretty Basic designs to be honest. But do what you do.
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Ages wrote Pretty Basic designs to be honest. But do what you do.


If you had read what I said, I clearly stated I acknowledged that and that was the exact reason im asking for advice..
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McFlurpies wrote
Ages wrote Pretty Basic designs to be honest. But do what you do.


If you had read what I said, I clearly stated I acknowledged that and that was the exact reason im asking for advice..

Meh who reads all that text. I just will look at your picture and have a biases.
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Ages wrote
McFlurpies wrote
Ages wrote Pretty Basic designs to be honest. But do what you do.


If you had read what I said, I clearly stated I acknowledged that and that was the exact reason im asking for advice..

Meh who reads all that text. I just will look at your picture and have a biases.


Sorry about all the text


tl;dr : Need advice to make my work better, it's my passion. Any C4D/Illustrator advice to make my work more complex is appreciated
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Sorry but for me simple and clean doesn't pass as good, and also your age doesn't matter lmao but in time I'm sure you'll get there.
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they looks nice good job man
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