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Could i have some constructive critisism please?
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Caififa
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so basically i have just uploaded a youtube video its my first proper attempt on one as my other one was just me packing messi i was wondering if you like the style of the video and what-not and what you guys think i should do to try and make it more watchable? anyway thanks for your time here is the link: [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]
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You should talk over it and say what's good and bad about them coz no one wants to read writing on a video then show you putting them all togther, also the music you have chosen isn't very good. Other then that its kool!
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Change. The. Song.

And try doing some commentary, no can be bothered to read all of that, too much info on the screen. Keep it simple.
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thanks, at the moment i am saving up some money for an elgato and a mic so once i have them i will definitely do that aswel as show some goals at the end too
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