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thatkidtejada
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Please give me feedback
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thatkidtejada
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Can you guys give feedback?
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Reversing
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it looks okay... i would advise looking at some tutorials.
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First, you have to add some shading and give it some detail cause it looks plain and boring right now.
Second, you have to work on the lines. They are very jagged everything needs to be smooth.
Third, there is a lot of little things you need to work on.
Fourth, he only has one eye..?

Just keep it up, I advise you to look up some tutorials and I'm sure you will get better.
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In all honesty, I'm not sure if this is supposed to be a finished piece, if you gave up, or a WIP...

Nevertheless, this looks extremely rushed and overall sloppy.

czr made some good points, but I'd like to know if this is a WIP, and what software you used before I go into a detailed CC...
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Illustrated
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Pretty sure its a WIP. Needs a looot of work on the lines. Very jagged.
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Lol some improvement might be needed.

Look up some tutorials because its looking messy at the moment
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