Lighting is annoying in places

Shaky camera

Your voice is also annoying

This is intended as constructive criticism, albeit pretty blunt

cheeze wrote Lighting is annoying in places

Shaky camera

Your voice is also annoying

This is intended as constructive criticism, albeit pretty blunt

Constructive criticism is normally meant to help the receiver. I can't change my voice, sorry. Also, I am not a "professional" reviewer. I make gameplay commentaries, not review videos. It's not gonna be the best one out there. Thanks, though.

You need to turn the flashlight on your phone off, Turn a lamp on. use a voice changer then the vid will be good!

1v1ing wrote

cheeze wrote Lighting is annoying in places

Shaky camera

Your voice is also annoying

This is intended as constructive criticism, albeit pretty blunt

Constructive criticism is normally meant to help the receiver. I can't change my voice, sorry. Also, I am not a "professional" reviewer. I make gameplay commentaries, not review videos. It's not gonna be the best one out there. Thanks, though.

It did/should have.

I told you your voice is annoying, followed by the duly required safety-net (that being the constructive criticism label to avoid me looking like a cuxt)

So, what can you do about that?

1. Talk less
2. Use on-screen text boxes instead and don't talk at all. I don't mean a narrative. Be informative yet minimalistic

The camera shake/lighting is self-explanatory

cheeze wrote

1v1ing wrote

cheeze wrote Lighting is annoying in places

Shaky camera

Your voice is also annoying

This is intended as constructive criticism, albeit pretty blunt

Constructive criticism is normally meant to help the receiver. I can't change my voice, sorry. Also, I am not a "professional" reviewer. I make gameplay commentaries, not review videos. It's not gonna be the best one out there. Thanks, though.

It did/should have.

I told you your voice is annoying, followed by the duly required safety-net (that being the constructive criticism label to avoid me looking like a cuxt)

So, what can you do about that?

1. Talk less
2. Use on-screen text boxes instead and don't talk at all. I don't mean a narrative. Be informative yet minimalistic

The camera shake/lighting is self-explanatory

First off, you should not even be talking. Lets look at your YouTube videos. His voice isnt annoying. He's British. Deal with it. And why the hell would he put text boxes that takes away fomr the whole video. The screen would be cluttered. His video was fine, except the lighting it was a bit to bright in places. 1v1ing dont pay attention to this guys he is full of it

Yoke wrote

cheeze wrote

1v1ing wrote

cheeze wrote Lighting is annoying in places

Shaky camera

Your voice is also annoying

This is intended as constructive criticism, albeit pretty blunt

Constructive criticism is normally meant to help the receiver. I can't change my voice, sorry. Also, I am not a "professional" reviewer. I make gameplay commentaries, not review videos. It's not gonna be the best one out there. Thanks, though.

It did/should have.

I told you your voice is annoying, followed by the duly required safety-net (that being the constructive criticism label to avoid me looking like a cuxt)

So, what can you do about that?

1. Talk less
2. Use on-screen text boxes instead and don't talk at all. I don't mean a narrative. Be informative yet minimalistic

The camera shake/lighting is self-explanatory

First off, you should not even be talking. Lets look at your YouTube videos. His voice isnt annoying. He's British. Deal with it. And why the hell would he put text boxes that takes away fomr the whole video. The screen would be cluttered. His video was fine, except the lighting it was a bit to bright in places. 1v1ing dont pay attention to this guys he is full of it

Made me giggle.

You -almost- sound hostile

First off, I'm English myself. It isn't his accent, it's his voice - there is a substantial difference

There are plenty of reviews/guides that do perfectly well with next to no voice-over

Great work though, internet good guy.

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yea it wasnt the best man im sorry.

Yoke wrote

cheeze wrote

1v1ing wrote

cheeze wrote Lighting is annoying in places

Shaky camera

Your voice is also annoying

This is intended as constructive criticism, albeit pretty blunt

Constructive criticism is normally meant to help the receiver. I can't change my voice, sorry. Also, I am not a "professional" reviewer. I make gameplay commentaries, not review videos. It's not gonna be the best one out there. Thanks, though.

It did/should have.

I told you your voice is annoying, followed by the duly required safety-net (that being the constructive criticism label to avoid me looking like a cuxt)

So, what can you do about that?

1. Talk less
2. Use on-screen text boxes instead and don't talk at all. I don't mean a narrative. Be informative yet minimalistic

The camera shake/lighting is self-explanatory

First off, you should not even be talking. Lets look at your YouTube videos. His voice isnt annoying. He's British. Deal with it. And why the hell would he put text boxes that takes away fomr the whole video. The screen would be cluttered. His video was fine, except the lighting it was a bit to bright in places. 1v1ing dont pay attention to this guys he is full of it

Thank you for sticking up for me... I know my lighting and camerawork were terrible, but I'm a commentator. I don't mind him being mean, because I did ask for opinions, but he was kind of just rude.. Oh well. The hate just gets me more attention.

I think it was an alright video. Not the best but at least you tried and showed your opinion. Good luck in the future