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speed art for an editing contest, opinions?

Ideas i could have improved on? cheers

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its not bad. The only thing is Captain America seems a little more pixelated than the rest of the images
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byExit wrote its not bad. The only thing is Captain America seems a little more pixelated than the rest of the images



Yeah, now that you mention it its even more obvious than i thought. Damn, cheers anyway, ill make sure i choose better stocks next time.
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I like this a lot really, mainly due to the fact it was nice to see you cut a lot of those images out. It was very nice. I do have a couple of suggestions~ I think you could tidy up the edges around your images, mainly around the mountain I think the edge is too noticeable and also the (ship?) launching doesn't fit entirely well but with some adjusting I think it would. I also think it could all benefit from some level and hue adjustment
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Vaiinn wrote I like this a lot really, mainly due to the fact it was nice to see you cut a lot of those images out. It was very nice. I do have a couple of suggestions~ I think you could tidy up the edges around your images, mainly around the mountain I think the edge is too noticeable and also the (ship?) launching doesn't fit entirely well but with some adjusting I think it would. I also think it could all benefit from some level and hue adjustment



Thanks for the reply and advice, ill certainly look at making my edges tidier and improve the overall look by adjusting the hue and saturation.

Cheers!
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this must have taken a lot of time and effort to create good job man!
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Azx wrote this must have taken a lot of time and effort to create good job man!


It took a fair amount of time yeah! thanks for the comment!
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Its ok, if this was your first manipulation then well done, but everything in the picture just looks off

There is no shadows and you can tell that captain america and the helicopter are not supposed to be in the image, you have to make everything in the image seem real.

Its a good effort but I think you should work on your shadow contrasts and blending.

Its an honest opinion and I'm not going to lie and say it looks awesome
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I do not do GFX or anything but i really liked the end result!
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I agree with ArielGraphics, your lighting is slightly off, but it's still not bad. Try and focus on a point where the light may be coming from (you can work it our from the background image) then add shadows, darkening and lightening of the images accordingly.
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