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Vector Work - OM/SnR
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In the past I never really came to the designer section because I barely got any feedback on my work but lately the graphics section looks like it has more people coming to it.
I have a few vector projects that I have worked on.
Now before previewing I want to give you the information on what I used and some self-criticism that I gave myself.
Program I used - Photoshop (I have Illustrator just the program is still confusing)
Mouse or Tablet - Mouse
For outlining and other details I used - Pentool
Now, in the projects you're about to view, there is close to no detailing at all in the hair which I am currently trying to work on. I'm trying to focus more on stranding the hair to give it more detail and that real hair look.
Without further or do. Here are my projects
Nicki Minaj Pills & Potions
Samantha Gutierrez
Venillana
These are 3 out of 4 of my projects.
If you would like to view the rest of my projects click [ Register or Signin to view external links. ] .
Thanks For Viewing
-Omar Maymi/SnR
I have a few vector projects that I have worked on.
Now before previewing I want to give you the information on what I used and some self-criticism that I gave myself.
Program I used - Photoshop (I have Illustrator just the program is still confusing)
Mouse or Tablet - Mouse
For outlining and other details I used - Pentool
Now, in the projects you're about to view, there is close to no detailing at all in the hair which I am currently trying to work on. I'm trying to focus more on stranding the hair to give it more detail and that real hair look.
Without further or do. Here are my projects
Nicki Minaj Pills & Potions
This Project Is A Illustration Of Nicki Minaj's
Cover For Pills N Potions. This Project Took
Me 5 Hours To Create. I feel that the shading is good
but that I could have done better on the hair.
On the right side the hair looks a bit stiff instead of
being nice and layed down.
Before
After
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Cover For Pills N Potions. This Project Took
Me 5 Hours To Create. I feel that the shading is good
but that I could have done better on the hair.
On the right side the hair looks a bit stiff instead of
being nice and layed down.
Before
After
--
Samantha Gutierrez
This is a project for a client and I think it turned out pretty good.
The things i'm still working on is detailing in hair.
I wanna try and work on getting into streaking it giving the strands more detail & depth
The right eyebrow looks kinda odd from the one on the left as of being thinner.
In this product I tried to focus on chin shading to give the chin a better look & feel that it's a chin.
The total time taken for this project was - 2 Hours 14 Minutes
Before
After
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The things i'm still working on is detailing in hair.
I wanna try and work on getting into streaking it giving the strands more detail & depth
The right eyebrow looks kinda odd from the one on the left as of being thinner.
In this product I tried to focus on chin shading to give the chin a better look & feel that it's a chin.
The total time taken for this project was - 2 Hours 14 Minutes
Before
After
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Venillana
The final product of a client.
This product took about 5 hours to complete.
My main focus in this piece was to work on hair detailing & strands.
I feel like I pulled it off but it could still use some working to make it look much better
Before
After
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This product took about 5 hours to complete.
My main focus in this piece was to work on hair detailing & strands.
I feel like I pulled it off but it could still use some working to make it look much better
Before
After
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These are 3 out of 4 of my projects.
If you would like to view the rest of my projects click [ Register or Signin to view external links. ] .
Thanks For Viewing
-Omar Maymi/SnR
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Alriiight some illustrations.
In the last two, I noticed te noses just look like big blurrly blobs.
They're too soft compared the the rest of the image.
But they do have good depth, and don't look flat which is good.
On the Samantha one, the bottom of the jaw is very soft, and blurry, While the edges of the face are very sharp.
It throws it all off for me.
And the eyelashes look roughhh.
The edges of the hair as well, look like it was done very quickly.
Unlike, in the Venillana one, you have lots of little hairs coming out, nicely.
The nicki minaj one is alright.
The face looks nice.
The skin is shaded nicely, but shes pretty shiny.
There's just a lot of rough edges on this one.. Especially the bottom edges of the hair. That's a mess.
I would just soften up some details, like the cleavage lines.
And refine some rough edges along the hair, And get the details in it, too.
In the last two, I noticed te noses just look like big blurrly blobs.
They're too soft compared the the rest of the image.
But they do have good depth, and don't look flat which is good.
On the Samantha one, the bottom of the jaw is very soft, and blurry, While the edges of the face are very sharp.
It throws it all off for me.
And the eyelashes look roughhh.
The edges of the hair as well, look like it was done very quickly.
Unlike, in the Venillana one, you have lots of little hairs coming out, nicely.
The nicki minaj one is alright.
The face looks nice.
The skin is shaded nicely, but shes pretty shiny.
There's just a lot of rough edges on this one.. Especially the bottom edges of the hair. That's a mess.
I would just soften up some details, like the cleavage lines.
And refine some rough edges along the hair, And get the details in it, too.
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Illustrated wrote Alriiight some illustrations.
In the last two, I noticed te noses just look like big blurrly blobs.
They're too soft compared the the rest of the image.
But they do have good depth, and don't look flat which is good.
On the Samantha one, the bottom of the jaw is very soft, and blurry, While the edges of the face are very sharp.
It throws it all off for me.
And the eyelashes look roughhh.
The edges of the hair as well, look like it was done very quickly.
Unlike, in the Venillana one, you have lots of little hairs coming out, nicely.
The nicki minaj one is alright.
The face looks nice.
The skin is shaded nicely, but shes pretty shiny.
There's just a lot of rough edges on this one.. Especially the bottom edges of the hair. That's a mess.
I would just soften up some details, like the cleavage lines.
And refine some rough edges along the hair, And get the details in it, too.
Thank you, Feels good getting some criticism from a Graphics King. I'll be sure to work on those areas and focus more on making it look a full on nice piece of work. Because I feel that in each one I had my mind set to certain parts to try and master. But thank you. Much appreciated
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