Personally, I think minimalist designs are better looking. Some quick things I'd suggest are picking a colour scheme, less text effects, and better font choice. For your name you could have a bold font to put emphasis on it, and for the secondary text choose something a bit smaller and thinner, so that it's there but doesn't take too much away from your name. Of course, if this is the style you like I can't offer much advice as I never design similarly.

tl:dr minimalism is prettier / pick a theme

Wow this was exactly what i was looking for! thank you so much.

Happy that I could help you out! c: