Personal Opinion here so you may not agree:
The texture is too low quality and I can see it repeat.
Im not a fan of the way you have sized and placed the letters for New Orleans
Typography is something I am not too strong with myself so i could be whistling from my ring here.
Just the way I view it

Yeah it looks really nice in my opinion. Looks a hit old fashioned but that might be the way you want it

Is the actual poster going to be letterpressed?
Just nit picky things but the kerning is a bit messy in 'New Orleans' and needs to be more evenly spaced out.

The body copy looks a little weird because it's aligned centered. Have you tried either aligning it to the left or make it justified to match the blocky aesthetic?

The overall design just looks a little too condensed and cluttered. It might look better if you experimented more with variation perhaps decreasing the body copy size and increasing the leading more to make it more airy.

exoticschnitzel wrote Is the actual poster going to be letterpressed?
Just nit picky things but the kerning is a bit messy in 'New Orleans' and needs to be more evenly spaced out.

The body copy looks a little weird because it's aligned centered. Have you tried either aligning it to the left or make it justified to match the blocky aesthetic?

The overall design just looks a little too condensed and cluttered. It might look better if you experimented more with variation perhaps decreasing the body copy size and increasing the leading more to make it more airy.

Yeah i made a completely new one, ill post it soon but thanks for the feedback