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I was bored so I decided to challenge myself and make and ad for an imaginary fashion website/blog in under 15 minutes. I ended up taking around 25 but here's the final result. Feel free to attempt this challenge and post your results!

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A few things I'm aware of :

- The red dress in the top picture clashes with the text.

- The space between the images is slightly too big.

- My choice of fonts is questionable.

All feedback and criticism is obviously welcome and greatly appreciated.

*edit : added a spoiler for the image.
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Simple but good, i like it... Nice work.
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Looks very nice and the thing about the fonts isn't true i think if the text was thinner that font would look great.
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I like it, i think it looks professional. I like the fact that you chose a serif typeface over a sans serif typeface because it shows the elegance of the fashion industry. Good work.
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It looks pretty good, don't worry about the top dress, but i would try to change the space to at least where it looks pretty even.
I like your choice of font, it looks nice and fits with this.
Nice job
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The font is spot on, the serif font reflects the luxury and premium brand that I can see in the images.

However, the type does need alignment - it's not perfectly centered in the image.

Overall a nice concept and a good effort. Keep it up.
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Looks nice. Much better than anything I could ever do.
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This is brilliant, this is layed out well.
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I like it, its very clean and simple, i like the text!
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Thanks everyone for the feedback, I appreciate it.
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