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Hey guys, so i was working on something for Zef's Competition that i am still working on. I only want suggestions on what i should add or take away, don't comment something like "8/10 i don't like the font"
Should i add different batman characters? mess with the channels and colors? Hue/saturation, brightness, just suggest anything below, thanks.
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Should i add different batman characters? mess with the channels and colors? Hue/saturation, brightness, just suggest anything below, thanks.
Here is the image:
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Maybe put batman where the faded jokers are? Since hes "going crazy", there should be something causing it (aka enemy batman)
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Definitely change the typeface , try something that fits the design better, something more blocky that stands out and gives the feel of a mad man! This could also represent prison walls , and with the joker being a criminal it links.
The batman symbols look very pixelated, i would suggest finding a higher quality image.
Im not too sure about this white and black you have in the background either, maybe find a dotted pattern for the background ?
I have lots of ideas for this design , PM me if you need inspiration
The batman symbols look very pixelated, i would suggest finding a higher quality image.
Im not too sure about this white and black you have in the background either, maybe find a dotted pattern for the background ?
I have lots of ideas for this design , PM me if you need inspiration
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Peas wroteDefinitely change the typeface , try something that fits the design better, something more blocky that stands out and gives the feel of a mad man! This could also represent prison walls , and with the joker being a criminal it links.
The batman symbols look very pixelated, i would suggest finding a higher quality image.
Im not too sure about this white and black you have in the background either, maybe find a dotted pattern for the background ?
I have lots of ideas for this design , PM me if you need inspiration
Why dont you enter Zef's contest yourself? You choose 1 of 3 images. This is one of them.
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-Evan wrotePeas wroteDefinitely change the typeface , try something that fits the design better, something more blocky that stands out and gives the feel of a mad man! This could also represent prison walls , and with the joker being a criminal it links.
The batman symbols look very pixelated, i would suggest finding a higher quality image.
Im not too sure about this white and black you have in the background either, maybe find a dotted pattern for the background ?
I have lots of ideas for this design , PM me if you need inspiration
Why dont you enter Zef's contest yourself? You choose 1 of 3 images. This is one of them.
Already did but i can't enter twice :/
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I mean its okay.. I would do more work with the text.. I goto school for graphic design and the text is the only thing that wouldnt be accepted
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