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This is a piece which I just made in around half an hour. First piece of work I've made for a while now so please give me some feedback. I did follow a tutorial for this so I wouldn't say it's very original but here it is.

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Zef (03-31-2015)
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Looks nice I guess, only problem I see is the weird thing around the text.
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Averul wrote Looks nice I guess, only problem I see is the weird thing around the text.


I know what you mean. I just followed the tutorial, but I don't like it lol.
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Looks pretty good, I like what you did and the idea behind it but only thing I would change would be the lines behind the text, delete the extra lines below the text and above it and blend it with the text/lines around the text.
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Reversing wrote Looks pretty good, I like what you did and the idea behind it but only thing I would change would be the lines behind the text, delete the extra lines below the text and above it and blend it with the text/lines around the text.


Thanks for the feedback mate, they could work out pretty cool if I did that.
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ehh im not feeling the background to me it just dosent fit with the text the two colors don't match well. maybe a purple and light blue or a orange and red?.
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The opacity on the word is a little weird, on the left it looks as if the effect is behind the image but since the opacity on the word is weird on the right it looks like the effect is above the word.
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Just looks like a bunch of renders thrown over simple text. I don't like it.
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I like it.

Nice vibe to it.

r8 8/8 m8
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Wow I really love this.
This grabs my eye!
Any chance you could link me the tutorial?
I would love to learn how to do this!
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