since not a company logo expect a lot of hate since it isn't "professional" or "market branding standards", lol.

anyway,

to me personally the b looks a bit like a g (can been seen as a b aswell)

the main thing i saw is the angles you used to cut off bits of the F to 'sharpen' the points. they aren't at consistent angle which is slightly bothering and i reckon would look better with a consistent angle used throughout

feel its a bit stretched as well? seems a tad bit long width-wise in comparison to the height

if you want me to explain anything please do so but i do not have gyazo on my work computer so i tried to explain to the best of my compatibility

OIIy wrote since not a company logo expect a lot of hate since it isn't "professional" or "market branding standards", lol.

anyway,

to me personally the b looks a bit like a g (can been seen as a b aswell)

the main thing i saw is the angles you used to cut off bits of the F to 'sharpen' the points. they aren't at consistent angle which is slightly bothering and i reckon would look better with a consistent angle used throughout

feel its a bit stretched as well? seems a tad bit long width-wise in comparison to the height

if you want me to explain anything please do so but i do not have gyazo on my work computer so i tried to explain to the best of my compatibility

Thanks for the feedback man! I definitely see where youre coming from about the consistency of the angles. although I did try and fix that and I just wasn't liking the way it looked afterwards.

and I also agree with you on the stretched thing. any ideas on how to fix that?

It is a nice start but not the way you should go.

EDIT: If you have added a drop shadow, turn down the opacity a little bit

Have you used a font to create this or have you made the shapes yourself?

-FMWK

Fxded wrote

OIIy wrote since not a company logo expect a lot of hate since it isn't "professional" or "market branding standards", lol.

anyway,

to me personally the b looks a bit like a g (can been seen as a b aswell)

the main thing i saw is the angles you used to cut off bits of the F to 'sharpen' the points. they aren't at consistent angle which is slightly bothering and i reckon would look better with a consistent angle used throughout

feel its a bit stretched as well? seems a tad bit long width-wise in comparison to the height

if you want me to explain anything please do so but i do not have gyazo on my work computer so i tried to explain to the best of my compatibility

Thanks for the feedback man! I definitely see where youre coming from about the consistency of the angles. although I did try and fix that and I just wasn't liking the way it looked afterwards.

and I also agree with you on the stretched thing. any ideas on how to fix that?

the only way i can suggest is by grouping all the shapes you've made and then ctrl-t'ing to change the width, doesn't seem the classiest way but the only way i know how to do it

FMWK wrote It is a nice start but not the way you should go.

EDIT: If you have added a drop shadow, turn down the opacity a little bit

Have you used a font to create this or have you made the shapes yourself?

-FMWK

Yeah it was made with a font, Xero's Theorem

OIIy wrote

Fxded wrote

OIIy wrote since not a company logo expect a lot of hate since it isn't "professional" or "market branding standards", lol.

anyway,

to me personally the b looks a bit like a g (can been seen as a b aswell)

the main thing i saw is the angles you used to cut off bits of the F to 'sharpen' the points. they aren't at consistent angle which is slightly bothering and i reckon would look better with a consistent angle used throughout

feel its a bit stretched as well? seems a tad bit long width-wise in comparison to the height

if you want me to explain anything please do so but i do not have gyazo on my work computer so i tried to explain to the best of my compatibility

Thanks for the feedback man! I definitely see where youre coming from about the consistency of the angles. although I did try and fix that and I just wasn't liking the way it looked afterwards.

and I also agree with you on the stretched thing. any ideas on how to fix that?

the only way i can suggest is by grouping all the shapes you've made and then ctrl-t'ing to change the width, doesn't seem the classiest way but the only way i know how to do it

I already had them all together so i just used the transform controls. How about now?

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[quote="FMWK"]It is a nice start but not the way you should go.

EDIT: If you have added a drop shadow, turn down the opacity a little bit

Have you used a font to create this or have you made the shapes yourself?

-FMWK[/quote

And yes I did have a drop shadow on it, set at 75%. I changed to it to 40%. I think it looks better.

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The edges of the letter seem a bit weird with some of them slanted and some not:



Try making them all one style

-FMWK

FMWK wrote The edges of the letter seem a bit weird with some of them slanted and some not:

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Try making them all one style

-FMWK

How do you suggest I do that? btw thanks for the help man!