Its not a totally bad design but it has a few flaws. The font is ok but your text is running together too much, making it almost illegible. It took me a long time of staring at it and not being able to read it. The only reason I figured out that it says Twistarts is because of the speed art video you posted.

Try spreading the text out and maybe add a drop shadow to make the text more legible.

RoyaL_Paaine wrote Its not a totally bad design but it has a few flaws. The font is ok but your text is running together too much, making it almost illegible. It took me a long time of staring at it and not being able to read it. The only reason I figured out that it says Twistarts is because of the speed art video you posted.

Try spreading the text out and maybe add a drop shadow to make the text more legible.

Alright thank you for the feedback!

How long did it take you to make that? with clipping and re aligning?

aMio wrote How long did it take you to make that? with clipping and re aligning?

Start to finish this took about 20-30 minutes.

Start over.
I have no clue what this says.
And this is a typography piece.

Edit:
I found out what is says finally,
I wouldn't use hyphens in typography,
it makes it hard to read.

It would probably look better with a different text or something, it's a little hard to distinguish what it says IMO. Although, the idea/layout is pretty good

CriticaI wrote

Start over.
I have no clue what this says.
And this is a typography piece.

Edit:
I found out what is says finally,
I wouldn't use hyphens in typography,
it makes it hard to read.

I didn't realize how hard it was to read. Obviously it was supposed to be more comples because it is a typography piece but I did'nt know it was diffict to read. Thank you.

Personally I would use a pre-made font, Try and make your own style. I quite like the idea of joining up the significant parts like the "i" and the "l" it makes it flow.

Agreed, try putting whole words on one line - no hyphens

I would rate 7/10,

-FMWK