If you're not gonna respect all of the real as hell artists in the game right now, you're not going to make it anywhere.

This is the typical "I had a rough upbringing" bullshit that's been spewed for decades.

Nothing real about this shit. If you want to be recognized quit being so pitifully generic.
Oh, and if that's you in the album art you're gonna want to quit saying the n word every other line, it's not gonna make you any fans.

I know it sounds like I'm being a dick and putting you down, but I'm giving you real criticism.
If I sat here saying "oh shit man this is game changing" I'd be lying to you, and that shit isn't going to help you at all.