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DEPRESSION - David Macias (New/Original Rap Song)
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This is my first song, I know it wasn't that good but I needed to make this.
It will be really awesome if i could get some constructive criticism.
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Feedback is always appreciated
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Not going to lie here but It was a pretty good song.

What i'm about to say inst about the lyrics but it seems like you backed away from the mic and started singing/rapping while moving closer to the mic if you feel me on this. Other than that I had to listen to the song twice just to hear the lyrics right and it gets me. Another thing is there are a lot of pauses in the song which kind of seems weird but I don't listen to a lot of rap(if this is rap) so i dont know if they do that a lot or not.

But the song was really nice man.
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Thanks. I really appreciate the feedback, I really do. About the mic issue thing, I agree. Hopefully my 2nd song will be better. Thank you again for the feedback.
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I just going to be honest with you mate. I personally dont like it. At all.
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