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-Bart
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Made this a couple weeks back for a media project and wondering you guys thought it was any good , just simple cinema 4d , anyway thank you for your opinions. [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]
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I like it but the lighting from the top doesn't look right. I can't place my finger on it but by where the cement beams are in the actual pic the text sticks out and looks like it doesn't belong but other than that it's cool bro
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The lighting is all wrong.
Have a look a the light sources in the image and try to replicate it to get realistic results.

What exactly is the project if you can get away with a simple C4D text on a background you found?
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I'm only in year 11 in school at the moment so nothing too major .
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I'm not a GFX Designer so I don't know what wrong or right with this image but what I can say the 3D Text looks good but I can agree the lighting is too much. Other than that it's all good on my end.
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It's just not good. It's text with a background, you didn't bother to make the background a bit darker either or even adding shaders which is easy as shit.
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