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any tips + criticisms apreciated


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link is broken.
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Looks good but the one this that is annoying me is the arms.

usually with body parts i have a black outline then i add some shadow and a bit of darker color.

the shading is great the colors are nice.

might want to fix his head near the left eye there is a gap.

7.5/10
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ok thanks ill do some fixes now and il repost
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here is the second bit is this better?

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LordGaben wrote here is the second bit is this better?

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much better.

why not make his flame glow ? it'll make it stand out more.
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oo yea i like!
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i like this

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LordGaben wrote i like this

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Looks great dude! Keep it up!
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