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Just finished up a minimal illustration of a scroll & quill..

Will add a coloured version in a bit.

Thoughts and comments always appreciated.

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looks nice

but it looks a bit weird because it looks like you put the letter e in 2 separate area's

apart from that it looks awesome
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OMGxTwisted wrote
looks nice

but it looks a bit weird because it looks like you put the letter e in 2 separate area's

apart from that it looks awesome


Yeah I figured that..

Thanks for your input. Will look into a fix.
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if i was you drop the stroke down 2-3 points
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Flown wrote if i was you drop the stroke down 2-3 points


And why would you do that if you were me?
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Branding wrote
Flown wrote if i was you drop the stroke down 2-3 points


And why would you do that if you were me?

he offered a suggestion and you call it not useful?

Plus, lowering it may make it look better indeed since the stroke does seem a bit too thick.
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Dashii wrote
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Flown wrote if i was you drop the stroke down 2-3 points


And why would you do that if you were me?

he offered a suggestion and you call it not useful?

Plus, lowering it may make it look better indeed since the stroke does seem a bit too thick.


Its unuseful as he didn't give a reason for his opinion.

You gave a reason so, not completely unuseful
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Dashii wrote
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Flown wrote if i was you drop the stroke down 2-3 points


And why would you do that if you were me?

he offered a suggestion and you call it not useful?

Plus, lowering it may make it look better indeed since the stroke does seem a bit too thick.


The stroke is meant to be thick. I only asked him why would he do that, not once did I say it was not useful.

The stroke weight for me works as its a minimal bold line art illustration.

I appreciate your comments
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Wish I was into minimal illustration myself, looks so good and clean. Looks stunning dude, love the colors.
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Branding wrote
Flown wrote if i was you drop the stroke down 2-3 points


And why would you do that if you were me?


Why ?

Like the other have said, it's too thick for my liking and if you dropped the stroke by 2-3 points it'll look more clean, i don't see why you have to question me you also don't need to do what i say.

It's just feedback mate, don't take it to heart.
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