Any feedback at all would be much appreciated as this is my first time attempting to write a song/ rap.
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I realise I can't leave too late 'cause every step I take could be the last one I make.

I was only young when I lost my mum never got to say and thank for all she'd done.

When my dad left it was so sudden it left me thinkin' what has just happened but maybe it was for the best.

Though you shouldn't mistake I don't look towards him with hate I get that it was hard for him to witness the pain but sometimes I wish he'd have just stayed.

It seems like any time I try to make a connection around the corner is a conniption "Don't do this, don't do that, atleast he's finally picking up his act"