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#11. Posted:
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didnt like the repetition of the last word in a bar "got bitched (bitches).....stay winning (winning) "
the intro could have been hyped up a bit
flow was kind of slow and made it seem like a freestyle that was turned into a song
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Not bad man, I like it!
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That's not bad bro
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It's actually not that bad mate! Keep it up
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Personally I found that song overly repetitive.

Try making it different to everyone else, stand out!
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I meant to post this one lol.


That's more like it, really like this one!!
#17. Posted:
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I thought it was very creative I can feel the production effort in the flow.
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It was alright, nothing special
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Well it isn't bad. Not my type of music really.

8/10
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Thank you guys for all the feedback, I hope one day il be able to give back to the site. I swear i would preform in a TTG shirt if you guys would like to promote me.
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