Things to work on:
> Better graphics such as thumbnails, banners, logo etc..
> All content should have a purpose. What I mean by this is that your video really has no purpose, just you commenting on what people already saw in the game play. Most commentaries people find interesting nowadays are when people are talking about a certain topic or story.
> Try focusing your videos around a certain subject with the game play in the background, even if its a live commentary, try to stay on a subject and talk constantly throughout the video.
> You never hear of someone telling another person to go check out this video of a guy playing TDM, but you do hear people telling others to go listen to this guys funny story and stuff like that.
- Keep up the good work and hopefully this helped a little.