Look's ok, needs adjustments..

SODAPOPxCURTISz wrote Its cool but the pauses are to long

thanks for the tip:]

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It was good but from my opinion it was way too drawn out, i mean you took bout 10 seconds of gameplay and made it into 1:45, thats just too much slo-mo in my opinion.

Not saying it was nice, just some constructive criticism.

Keep it up

Nice edit but it goes WAYY TOO SLOW :S Dont make it too slow mate,

Love the style.

CC

Slow mo goes on way to long.
first one is 20 seconds long just for a kinife throw.
second is over that for a simple reload clip

The flares in the first section were too bright.

Sort out the slow mo lengths and flare brightness and your away

Some good effects.

But the first throwing knife took a long time, I'd change that if I were you.

8/10