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Anyone willing to read my nazi zombie short story?
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After WWII a deadly virus was released after the death of Hitler. The virus was called Nova 6. Nova 6 is a toxic chemical that spreads just by rubbing past each other. So a war veteran, Dempsey, was sent out to find the source of Nova 6. On his journey their, he saw a Soviet Soldier, Nikolai, that was badly injured on the dirt path. He picked him up and rushed as quick as he could to a nearby hospital. But it wasnt a hospital. It was a Nazi laboratory that connected to a chain of buildings.
They ran inside and into a scientist, Dr. Richtofen, and he helped stitch up Nikolai. After that, they heard a gunshot from another building. Dempsey said, That sounded like a colt .45. All three of them heard groaning behind them thinking it was Nikolai, but he was standing right in front of him. They turn around and see an infected Nazi soldier from Nova 6. He had blazing orange eyes with skin that peeled off like wet paper. The soldier slowly walked towards them, then the doctor murmured not to disturb it or it will retaliate. Dempsey didnt hear him so his first reaction was to pull out his revolver and shoot three rounds into him. It didnt affect him at all and it started to sprint towards them. They all ran into a theater and jumped behind a desk for about 2 and a half hours.
They heard gun shots and they checked to see if the zombie was alive. Its dead and they were wondering were it came from. They found the source from the noise of a colt .45 and it is a stranded Japanese soldier, Takeo, who was defending himself against the zombies. They killed the small hoard of zombies then regrouped by a nearby armory. They gather as much guns, ammo, and supplies as possible. They went back to the theater and heard a little girl laugh as if it was possessed by a satanic presence. They looked all around and all the doors were slammed shut. So Nikolai freaks out and trys to open a door, its locked. Then trys the next, its locked too.
A loud screech of some sort of banshee deafened Dr. Richtofen, Nikolai, Takeo, and Dempsey. Nikolai said in a drunken Russian voice, Well, it looks like we have to defend this place for a bit, right?. Dr. Richtofen said, Ja, indeed. I know a vay to stop this, but you all have to trust me! So Dempsey grabbed the doctor by the neck and screamed in a brute like manner, YOURRE THE *** HOLE THAT CAUSED ALL OF THIS AINT YA! YOU BETTER NOT BE PLAYING WITH US AND TRYING TO GET US KILLED! If you really vant me too.., said the doctor angrily under his breath.
Then a lifeless round of zombies barged through the boarded up windows as if they were a bunch of wound up cattle, and jolted towards all of them. They fired their whole their clip into about twelve undead Nazi Soldiers. When the zombies were all dead, they hear creepy nursery rhyme music start to play and a door opened up and nobody was their. They found some documents that had Adolf Hitlers signature on it. The doctor said, This vas were the Third Reich vas planned, and his four year old niece vas shot and killed by a German General because of the Nova 6 chemical vas taking him over and he couldnt control himself. Takeo can speak good English, but can barely understand it from their accents. He said, When I came in this Theater of the Dead, so you call it, I saw a little child run away in the auditorium were the projector was, I followed her and she phased through a wall and I freaked out. I started to shoot at the wall and blood dripped from the wall as if I shot her. But an arm broke the wall and a soldier with a swastika on his soldier came out to bite me and then I opened fire. Thats probably when you heard my gun. Takeo, take us were you saw the girl.
Takeo lead the group on were he saw it. They found an opening and went inside. They couldnt believe their eyes.
::PLEASE COMMENT:: Thanks, Eric
After WWII a deadly virus was released after the death of Hitler. The virus was called Nova 6. Nova 6 is a toxic chemical that spreads just by rubbing past each other. So a war veteran, Dempsey, was sent out to find the source of Nova 6. On his journey their, he saw a Soviet Soldier, Nikolai, that was badly injured on the dirt path. He picked him up and rushed as quick as he could to a nearby hospital. But it wasnt a hospital. It was a Nazi laboratory that connected to a chain of buildings.
They ran inside and into a scientist, Dr. Richtofen, and he helped stitch up Nikolai. After that, they heard a gunshot from another building. Dempsey said, That sounded like a colt .45. All three of them heard groaning behind them thinking it was Nikolai, but he was standing right in front of him. They turn around and see an infected Nazi soldier from Nova 6. He had blazing orange eyes with skin that peeled off like wet paper. The soldier slowly walked towards them, then the doctor murmured not to disturb it or it will retaliate. Dempsey didnt hear him so his first reaction was to pull out his revolver and shoot three rounds into him. It didnt affect him at all and it started to sprint towards them. They all ran into a theater and jumped behind a desk for about 2 and a half hours.
They heard gun shots and they checked to see if the zombie was alive. Its dead and they were wondering were it came from. They found the source from the noise of a colt .45 and it is a stranded Japanese soldier, Takeo, who was defending himself against the zombies. They killed the small hoard of zombies then regrouped by a nearby armory. They gather as much guns, ammo, and supplies as possible. They went back to the theater and heard a little girl laugh as if it was possessed by a satanic presence. They looked all around and all the doors were slammed shut. So Nikolai freaks out and trys to open a door, its locked. Then trys the next, its locked too.
A loud screech of some sort of banshee deafened Dr. Richtofen, Nikolai, Takeo, and Dempsey. Nikolai said in a drunken Russian voice, Well, it looks like we have to defend this place for a bit, right?. Dr. Richtofen said, Ja, indeed. I know a vay to stop this, but you all have to trust me! So Dempsey grabbed the doctor by the neck and screamed in a brute like manner, YOURRE THE *** HOLE THAT CAUSED ALL OF THIS AINT YA! YOU BETTER NOT BE PLAYING WITH US AND TRYING TO GET US KILLED! If you really vant me too.., said the doctor angrily under his breath.
Then a lifeless round of zombies barged through the boarded up windows as if they were a bunch of wound up cattle, and jolted towards all of them. They fired their whole their clip into about twelve undead Nazi Soldiers. When the zombies were all dead, they hear creepy nursery rhyme music start to play and a door opened up and nobody was their. They found some documents that had Adolf Hitlers signature on it. The doctor said, This vas were the Third Reich vas planned, and his four year old niece vas shot and killed by a German General because of the Nova 6 chemical vas taking him over and he couldnt control himself. Takeo can speak good English, but can barely understand it from their accents. He said, When I came in this Theater of the Dead, so you call it, I saw a little child run away in the auditorium were the projector was, I followed her and she phased through a wall and I freaked out. I started to shoot at the wall and blood dripped from the wall as if I shot her. But an arm broke the wall and a soldier with a swastika on his soldier came out to bite me and then I opened fire. Thats probably when you heard my gun. Takeo, take us were you saw the girl.
Takeo lead the group on were he saw it. They found an opening and went inside. They couldnt believe their eyes.
::PLEASE COMMENT:: Thanks, Eric
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wow, I do not know if I will read all of it, but it seems like an okay story. (:
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