#11. Posted:
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Gabriel wrote
Rui wrote Not bad at all, however their is a few things that could be done to improve,
Blending of colours, also the blur tool could be turned down a bit because it's quite over powering, I would go for a much better looking text.

Their also is too much going on.


The whole point is to sell a scene, Season X has boasted a very whimsical and capricious setting with graphical elements appearing in places they normally wouldn't - therefore, I find the piece to be quite relevant to the current season's "out of time" theme. I personally find the piece to be quite appeasing and would be interested in seeing a remake with more updated raster elements from the current season and a more consistent color grade with analogous colors utilized as the pallet.


As you just stated "Sell a scene" their is way to much going on to that? I see no relevance to that at all, you simply are grasping at straws and trying to use over expresses words to back your point.

I made a simple opinion on how to improve on what he's done in fact he's done a great job, however you choosing to run your mouth and use "big words" or the "Actual terms" seems very excessive.

Let me continue by saying in what point did he say it reflects this season? He could of done that before Season 10 not saying he has but trying to justify your point by mentioning something he hasn't.

In simple it could be toned down theirs to much going on and to much blur being used to point focus at what he's wanting you know too.
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I think you did a fantastic job

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