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something I made, it has the work failure right there in the middle.



let me know what you think

ok thanks
luv u, bye xox


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to me its hard to read maybe the colors clash too much. I cant put my tongue on it.
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Psyche wrote to me its hard to read maybe the colors clash too much. I cant put my tongue on it.


I am not sure I designed it to be that readable... idk just something I made when I was bored, thanks for the feedback bby xoxox
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love it !!! You cared alot on the detail, and specifically I personally love to make sure my artwork is very detailed, Im not professional or anything but I make sure my work is very detailed, id rather care more about detail then all these crazy renders, its simple, very detailed, and I love the colors!!! But ofcourse people are gonna be like "too much color" or whatever, but I think you killed this !!!
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There's something about fonts that have a loads of different colours I hate however, this has proven me wrong, it's vibrant yet dark. It's unique in its own way, not copycat or anything at all. For something out of boredom it's cool af.
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I think the color combination and thought that you had for this finished design is there but, I think you need to try and add multiple layers of "Failure" to make it stand out a bit more almost like a 3d affect. Give that a go and then decide what you think of it.
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This looks amazing. Honestly, you did a great job.
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