ShowcaseLatest Thread Design - Thoughts?
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Kanna
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16 (08-15-2020), Tasty (08-13-2020), kim (08-13-2020), UWishIWazHostin (08-13-2020)
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Not bad at all really like the colors.
Great job!
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I like it. I like the COD theme in general. I feel like you didn't go over the top with things either. It looks clean and is pleasing to the eye. Gets the important info across
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The design itself isn't bad. there are a few things i personally would've liked to have seen.

such as: instead of colored logos for the payments, make your own with wire framing or similar(using font awesome works great for these as well). see below.

https://i.imgur.com/GCDMEqe.png
https://i.imgur.com/nZGpnIy.png


Now for some of the actual minor critiques.

  • Text is a bit small especially on larger resolutions that the image doesn't scale on.
    • The shadowing on the text is nice though it is a bit aggressive, a lower tone and stretch would be a good revamp choice.
  • The box fade outs could be a bit better, though this is personal preference.
    • a fix for this could be carding, but i don't think that would go well with the thread design; maybe a less aggressive blur as well.
  • I absolutely love the first two rows, but the information sheet needs the most work. It's honestly not that bad but instead of green, try using an offset white/cloud like color. It's easier to read contrasting colors.(i understand you were going for the MW colors)


Overall it's well thought out but could use some work in terms of placement and color choices.
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16 wrote The design itself isn't bad. there are a few things i personally would've liked to have seen.

such as: instead of colored logos for the payments, make your own with wire framing or similar(using font awesome works great for these as well). see below.

https://i.imgur.com/GCDMEqe.png
https://i.imgur.com/nZGpnIy.png


Now for some of the actual minor critiques.

  • Text is a bit small especially on larger resolutions that the image doesn't scale on.
    • The shadowing on the text is nice though it is a bit aggressive, a lower tone and stretch would be a good revamp choice.
  • The box fade outs could be a bit better, though this is personal preference.

    • a fix for this could be carding, but i don't think that would go well with the thread design; maybe a less aggressive blur as well.
  • I absolutely love the first two rows, but the information sheet needs the most work. It's honestly not that bad but instead of green, try using an offset white/cloud like color. It's easier to read contrasting colors.(i understand you were going for the MW colors)


Overall it's well thought out but could use some work in terms of placement and color choices.


To be honest, half the stuff you critiqued me on, I thought about when designing it, didn't know whether to type the payment methods out or use logos, and I totally agree, the worst part about it for me is the info box, but the customer was pleased so I didn't want to change things for my needs lol.

I very much appreciate the feedback, it actually helps more than it seems. Thankyou mate
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