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I've only been using adobe draw app on my mobile phone to make these designs so it's virtually impossible to use any kind of fonts. So it won't be the best but it's decent! I decided to experiment with my username as a logo I might use in the future of my designs, not to sure right now though. Please can you give me some feedback?
Updated version https://i.imgur.com/yFBdwPz.png COOL STUHFF Version #1 https://i.imgur.com/0Vh3pQA.png https://i.imgur.com/hxKMZuy.png You guys always leave great feedback, so once again, thank you :3 <3 |
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| Clean for being made on mobile. |
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| I like it man, really like the lines, the second one is nice but for some reason the quality looks blotchy |
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Concept looks good, I've come up with a few things I noticed to help improve..
I understand that mobile has limitations but I noticed a few things to fix if you can: https://i.imgur.com/IQh0pow.jpg
You want to keep the same flow throughout the text to allow the viewer's eye to be directed in the right places. Color:
Color choice can be improved a bit, the tannish color on the bottom half doesn't match very well with the background, I would suggest tinting it or picking a new background or bottom half color overall. Overall: I think there are a lot of great things here, some stuff to be improved, but in general it looks pretty well done. Keep at it |
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spf wrote Hey man! Just like to say thank you for the great feedback! I've gone ahead and tried to change the things you mentioned however, there's always a little bump here & there https://i.imgur.com/yFBdwPz.png |
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