ShowcaseThoughts on my new GFX?
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So i made some new graphics and im getting better. what is your thoughts on my new header.

https://i.imgur.com/jvO8gp4.png

This is for my twitter header. and I am happy cause I am getting bettter by just making these.

here is the second scrap i made.

https://i.imgur.com/vRpN3S9.png


which one is better scrap 1 or scap 2?

Im liking scrap 2!


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What other touches you think i can do to this? lmk here.
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I did scrap 1 and scrap 2. which one you like better?
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The overall composition is nice on this and very direct to the point; alignment of everything also looks pretty good as well.
I did notice there is a variety of image quality here, from crispy to pixelated, you always want to make sure your resources are the same quality.
Basically if you have to scale something up either find a better resolution file or make the overall project smaller (if applicable).
The second option posted looks the best in the informational section. The first one has the text overstylized for it purpose.
The smaller sub texts almost never need a lot of style or depth when paired with larger type that is designed to draw the eye and stand out.
You wanna keep the important info in the foreground of what the eye catches.

I do have one question about the lightning bolt that goes over the face, is that part of the base stock or something you overlaid on top?

Overall good concept, colors & layout! Keep up the good work and if you ever want help feel free to DM me!

Zef

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Zef wrote
The overall composition is nice on this and very direct to the point; alignment of everything also looks pretty good as well.
I did notice there is a variety of image quality here, from crispy to pixelated, you always want to make sure your resources are the same quality.
Basically if you have to scale something up either find a better resolution file or make the overall project smaller (if applicable).
The second option posted looks the best in the informational section. The first one has the text overstylized for it purpose.
The smaller sub texts almost never need a lot of style or depth when paired with larger type that is designed to draw the eye and stand out.
You wanna keep the important info in the foreground of what the eye catches.

I do have one question about the lightning bolt that goes over the face, is that part of the base stock or something you overlaid on top?

Overall good concept, colors & layout! Keep up the good work and if you ever want help feel free to DM me!

Zef



The lightning bolt is actually the base stock thats how it was. and I appreciate everything This has been my first project that looks really good. I am getting better and better by just trying these situations.
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i like the 2nd one more
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100% the second one, the green outline is better imo.
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Team073 wrote 100% the second one, the green outline is better imo.


Same I like it too!
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second one looks cleaner
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a lot of compression going on here from the original unless you upscaled. Personally my advice would be to learn how to use shadows a little more that way it doesn't look like you're just stamping on the logos. It's been a while since i've really worked with anything design wise in this sense but the concept still remains. You could work with shadows and emboss it in the image so the textures are roughly the same. Add in some color that way you can distinguish the logos for said service. Likewise you could go for an embroidered look.
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