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Wrote these lyrics a while ago. I made music for it, which I put up on Youtube. I may post a link to it here.

Behind My Mask

Verse 1:
As I wake up
I put on my mask
Hiding the pain and suffering
In my past

The last tear falls
As I wipe it away
Shield my heart
As I start my day

The pain I suffered
I cover and hide
Hoping no one ever tries
To look inside

Pre-Chorus:
Cause I know what I am
I know what's inside
I know what's lurching side my mind
(repeat x3)

Chorus:
Cause I
Know they won't like
What they see
A monster is living
Inside of me
(repeat x3)
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SS_Rockman wrote Wrote these lyrics a while ago. I made music for it, which I put up on Youtube. I may post a link to it here.

Behind My Mask

Verse 1:
As I wake up
I put on my mask
Hiding the pain and suffering
In my past

The last tear falls
As I wipe it away
Shield my heart
As I start my day

The pain I suffered
I cover and hide
Hoping no one ever tries
To look inside

Pre-Chorus:
Cause I know what I am
I know what's inside
I know what's lurching side my mind
(repeat x3)

Chorus:
Cause I
Know they won't like
What they see
A monster is living
Inside of me
(repeat x3)


Nice nice.
Very dark.
Itd be awesome if you took that and started getting more positive with it.
Like towards the end start talking about how the mask thats been hiding you isnt needed
A little like the face of death. Just a mask, yet when removed..there is nothing to fear.

Just an idea!
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SS_Rockman wrote Wrote these lyrics a while ago. I made music for it, which I put up on Youtube. I may post a link to it here.

Behind My Mask

Verse 1:
As I wake up
I put on my mask
Hiding the pain and suffering
In my past

The last tear falls
As I wipe it away
Shield my heart
As I start my day

The pain I suffered
I cover and hide
Hoping no one ever tries
To look inside

Pre-Chorus:
Cause I know what I am
I know what's inside
I know what's lurching side my mind
(repeat x3)

Chorus:
Cause I
Know they won't like
What they see
A monster is living
Inside of me
(repeat x3)


Nice nice.
Very dark.
Itd be awesome if you took that and started getting more positive with it.
Like towards the end start talking about how the mask thats been hiding you isnt needed
A little like the face of death. Just a mask, yet when removed..there is nothing to fear.

Just an idea!


Thanks for the feedback, I'll definitely keep that in mind!

Also, here's the track I made for it. [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]
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Wow that sounded really good.
I could definitely match the tone of the audio to the mood of your lyrics.
Put them together and publish it!
Im ready to hear.
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This thread will for sure be good for the musicians of TTG.
Good post Lyrical!
And nice song! Cant wait to hear it all done
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*Updated*
Posted different lyrics of mine on the thread
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