i need help with my commentary, i want to know what i could improve, im not really good at the moment but i really want to improve and need peoples advice,please give me feedback:)
here is my channel ...

im thinking of buying a tablet so i can draw and animate on but i dont know what one to get etc could any of you please recommend some to me please?

could someone please make me an intro?

i will make titles more attractive and try to play diff games

ahh no problem,could you tell me if there is anything wrong with my commentary please

sub please did it

http://youtu.be/RQBftotiGU4

http://www.youtube.com/user/TheCookieMons7a?feature=mhee

okay im goin to start playing slender and other com games,any games in mind?

thanks what do you think about gears of war and forza motorsport 4 and is my commentary bad or good?

i have decent amount of videos up and they are videos people watch and i don't know why im not getting any views am i doing something wrong?here is a link to the channel

http://www.youtube.com/user ...

http://www.youtube.com/user/TheCookieMons7a?feature=mhee

sub please