Nice! Much better than the first draft.
Are you manually wrapping the body text around the letters? It looks a little inconsistent in the margins. Not sure if you're adding text through Photoshop or ...

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I agree with the above. I'm a school term away from graduating with my degree in graphic design, and I haven't really seen that kind of work in the field either. However, there is plenty of d ...

Is the actual poster going to be letterpressed?
Just nit picky things but the kerning is a bit messy in 'New Orleans' and needs to be more evenly spaced out.

The body copy looks a little weird bec ...

Monospace typefaces like Monoxil and Letter Gothic STD.
Clarendon, and generally most slab-serifs.

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I think the words 'Cafe' and 'Verve' need to be tweaked a little. They seem a little wonky and squished. You should probably open up the kerning for it - same with the letters and numbers in the X.
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Thank you, Pin!! I wanted to create a brand that appealed to a variety of gamers.

Thank you for taking the time to check it out!

I really like Apache Audio! It looks great and dynamic. Maybe you can try to align "the official channel of" to the left rather than the center of the overall logo?

Or have you tried to ...

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I am a graphic designer from Portland, OR working on a project exploring the various reasons why people choose to game. It is called Gamers Society and I am asking fellow gamers to an ...