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A lot of commas but its quite good.
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-Cloud9 wrote A lot of commas but its quite good.
Thanks , I Kinda Overuse Commas
>:L
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Where wroteHaha, honestly though it's a good start. I like the "go to sleep" reference. ;DPrestiqe wrote Y, SO, MANY, COMMAS?
ROFL
Its my way of writing
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SpdyZ06 wrote What is lucid dreaming?Click this link: Forums/t=2972338/lucid-dreaming-c...dream.html
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Prestiqe wroteWhere wroteHaha, honestly though it's a good start. I like the "go to sleep" reference. ;DPrestiqe wrote Y, SO, MANY, COMMAS?
ROFL
Its my way of writing
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Jeff The Killer FTW
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i like it nice job 8/10
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I've tried to lucid dream before but failed but after hearing this F*ck that
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Many comma's... Not a bad story, but you might want to format your paragraph better.
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This is weird bro...
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Sit wrotePrestiqe wrote Y, SO, MANY, COMMAS?
I, Was, Thinking, The, Same, Thing.
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