Bud. This is great for first piece.

I'm absolutely loving the fact you took what i said to hear on how to learn. Because this is honestly alot better than my first piece ever. I love the you actually added a sky, and attempted to try and keep decent lighting.

It looks overexposed though i don't know what happened to the quality. Possible Photoshop? I'm assuming you used the hair effector for the grass, Which is good, but What i'd do, Maybe its too early but take a plane and model into a shape of Blade of grass because realistically grass has some shape to it.

Go to the Hair effector Menu and set it to instance then drop the shape you just made into the instance. Makes for some beautifully clean looking foliage.

i like the dusk look. Although i think i need to give you a small class on texturing and lighting. Your by far my favorite student yet. You listen.

Also one other thing, Try playing with gradients when you texture a radial gradient on the dirt would have made it alot cleaner and a vertical one on the grass would have just made it pop.

I think the plane for the field could have been a bit bigger But its all a learning experience.

This is great bud, People who don't use c4d can't really tell How much Little stuff you actually thought out and took into effect. and it's awesome it just needs some fine tuning.


With roots theres an effector for it, But it can cause some pretty funky shit to happen so i reccomend learning a little bit about it first.