Or something this like

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Any feedback on both would be appreciated.

When going simple you have to get it spot on or it stands out too much.

Top of the J.
Either smooth it or bring the kick out a bit more
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Maybe cut it from a circular template so it is continuous and smooth.
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Make sure all edges are aligned and filled.
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Second one is a meh no go for me

The first one is pretty good I have to say.

The second one makes me feel ill.

Also as Asymmetrical pointed out, you need to focus on producing, better quality images.

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Have a look at this man.

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Have a look at this man.

Thanks for the feedback both ,Again i know it wasent perfect i was mainly asking about the ideas.

I have to create a portfolio for uni , Personal statement and apply etc ,As well as a few other things so im quite busy so generally ill just get a quick idea post it up here and see what people think of the general idea and then work on actually making that idea better if people say its good or if people dont like it i may not work on it (Depending on what it is or if i like it)

This idea im not sure , I really liked the first idea when i first created (I think its because ive been trying to create a logo for so logo and couldn't think of anything) but after a while im not sure if i like it.

Certainly alot better than the others i have designed though.Ill fix the few problems you guys have pointed out but in terms of the idea do you think its ok to continue with that idea?

I would stick with that idea, try different things within that idea aswell, maybe rotate it a little or try different line styles.

Asymmetrical wrote I would stick with that idea, try different things within that idea aswell, maybe rotate it a little or try different line styles.

Ok thanks man i thought this would be the best option but thought it was a little too simple.

Also i dont get TTG , Theres hours without a reply and then as soon as one person replys there is always a few more straight after that haha.

I'm just a random, don't know much about designing so my opinion probably doesn't matter.

Anyway, it almost seems to simple to me.
I like a bit of color and something that captures my attention.

It is nice though, easy on the eyes.